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BignSmalls Review
Del-
I like your review on Welcome to Macintosh, it is informative, interesting, and has your professionally stated opinion. Your grammar is excellent and your views are relevant. Altogether well written, keep up the good work!
Mac-
Your review is a breath of fresh air. It has everything needed for a good review, opinion, synopsis and most importantly good grammar. Keep up the good work.
Mcmixon and Mcfoeher Showtime
Mac-
You had some good points but you need to expound on them. I like how you give a rating and how you talk about some good parts of the movie. These will be a lot better for people to read if you fix your grammar.
Del-
I am a little confused about the middle portion, it seemed a little run-on and the 'I's weren't capitalized. I would also emphasize checking your grammar, it would really add to your opinion. Oh, and try to explain your opinion even if you don't know exactly what to say. Just say it.
CNK
Del-
You have a good start, but I think you could explain a little more on your opinion. Another thing to check is your grammar, there are some discrepancies I can see and they detract from the overall strength of your view.
Mac-
It will help you if you follow the how to write a movie review article. It lays out what you need and if you do that you can get an A
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